Your composition is really interesting, but you need to find yourself a guitar(ist), it can really bring it to life.
Shoot me a message :)
It's a pretty decent song... but... Slayer much? :P
Yeah, fuck originality. If my stuff sounds like Slayer I'll take that as a compliment.
This is so weird, it's cool
This sounds like something you could put under either a very cutesy pet-food commercial, or an extremely silly cartoon. It's fun, it's cheerful (VERY much so even) and well put together.
The only downside I can point out is really that I think if you're halfway the song, you've heard the ending and the mixing makes the high piano a bit intrusive.
Other then that, this is really good stuff!
This... is a mess
Allright, this song is a mess of sh*t, I think I heard a basemelody and I think I heard something that sorta sounded like a solo but that was about all I could make out from this one.
I realize that this is a preview, and I heard some nice combinations in here, but it's not a whole, it sounds like you made some cool bits and chucked them together which, in my opinion, isn't what music is about.
Keep trying though, if you like this sorta thing keep working on it and improving it, let other people (if they know music, and that's a big IF :P) listen to your song and give you criticism as well. Oh and please drop me a line the next time you release something, I'm curious to see where you intend on taking things.
Not half bad
This was actually a decent little song, although it's not really my thing I liked the way it was put together.
Few things I wanted to point out though, first... and this one counts! Tune your guitar properly before you record anything! Especially some bits ended up a bit dodgy as a result. Also keep practicing on your singing, and finally... from where you turn on your overdrive/distortion on the guitar... it becomes very blurry so try recording that bit separately so you can make it come out better in the end.
Hope you take these things to hart cause you're well underway already :)
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